7.18.2008

being

a life that leaves,
a sign of pain.
a life she berieves.
a sign to remain.

a love for one.
a future is struck.
a love is undone.
a future turns dusk.

a new beginning.
a shredding sorrow.
a new undoing.
a tearful morrow.

10 comments:

Melissa said...

are there any words to truly express my gratitude on your full understanding of this happening? I can assure you my heart is as grateful as ever for a friendship such as yours. Tuesday I will hope to be able to speak with you. It will be the best time for me as the time will be all mine.

Anonymous said...

****a love for one.
a future is struck.
a love is undone.
a future turns dusk

the start and the end is separated by a thin line isnt it? I loved those lines..

Pavitra said...

Beautiful...

But then life does go on and with each tear in the morrow comes a little laughter and joy.

Anonymous said...

Very good......

Id it is said...

Powerful words to spell out what it means 'to be'!

Cynthia said...

The bittersweet song of life,
falling and rising like breath.

Unknown said...

Hi,

I came across your blog and wanted to say hello. My name is Iri Amirav and I am a co-founder at iMedix. iMedix is a website that helps hundreds of thousands of patients every month and we’ve recently decided to form a Support Group for Bipolar patients: http://www.imedix.com/Bipolar

I am looking for leaders who will be interested to start and manage this group with me and thought you might be a good person to speak with about finding patients in need. I would love to speak with you and tell you more about who we are and what we are trying to accomplish.

Please feel free to contact me by email. In addition, you can find me on the iMedix website under the nickname irus.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best,

Iri

irus.imedix@gmail.com

Amused Alien said...

well long bak u left a comment on my blog

and that made me go through yours and i was not able to understan your words

from that day until today i have been through so much that i dont only understand but feel what you mean

Sh'shank said...

a thought a plunge
in the darkness deep
lost forever in the impulse
beat

Polarimbi said...

Sometimes being is all when we can be.